【写作要求】
Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后,她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示,写一篇英语短文。
In the past
Now
Personalities
shy, quiet, get nervous easily
brave, outgoing…
Hobbies
reading
reading, singing…
Abilities
good at dancing, singing…
要求:
1. 覆盖要点,可以合理增加细节;
2. 80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
【优秀满分范文】
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing, and dancing. She is good at them as well.
People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.
本单元话题为“我们怎样变化的”,主要围绕人或事物从过去到现在所发生的变化展开描述。写作时首先要理清写作的逻辑顺序,注意过去与现在的对比。在句式的使用上,既可用used to do/be…,but now…,也可以直接用一般过去时描述过去的情况,用一般现在时描写现在的情况,各种句式交替使用,以免文章显得呆板。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
(1) …used to do/be
(2) How/what about you?
(3) …has/have changed a lot in the last few years.
【典型例题】
请你以Changes in people’s lif
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