10 理想与未来 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析.docx

10 理想与未来 NO.1 （2022·黑龙江大庆·中考真题） 2022年令世人瞩目，在过去的半年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。 要点：1.你的梦想是什么？ 2.原因是什么？ 3.为此你会怎么做？ 注意：1.词数90左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。 My Dream ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【 满分作文赏析 】 My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I